‘not a valid url’

July 19, 2015

Still, after all these years, wishing I understood WordPress better. Sigh. It says my link to Facebook isn’t valid. That is as maybe. But it works!

If your experience is that it doesn’t (should you feel inspired to try it – even just out of devilment) do let me know. I will then go to the trouble of attempting to fix it.

However, from where I’m sitting it ain’t broke, so …

Cooool offer

September 25, 2016

My volume of short stories – Ice Cold Passion – is available free on Kindle US and UK) from 27 until 1 October.

Get it while it’s … er …  cold.

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Book review: As Wings Unfurl by Arthur M Doweyko

September 21, 2016

**Originally written for “BigAl’s Books and Pals” book blog. May have received a free review copy.**

As Wings Unfurl by [Doweyko, Arthur M.]

Genre: SF/crime

Description: “Applegate Bogdanski returns from Vietnam with a missing leg, a Purple Heart, and an addiction to morphine. He stumbles through each day, looking forward to nothing and hoping it will arrive soon. When he attempts to thwart a crime, he is knocked unconscious and wakes up to discover that people are once again calling him a hero, though he feels undeserving of the praise.

Apple returns to work and meets Angela, a mysterious woman who claims to be his guardian. Immediately, he feels a connection to her, which morphs into an attraction. But he soon discovers that Angela is much more than she seems.

Apple and Angela are swept up in a conspiracy that stretches through time and space. Together, they must fight to save everything they hold dear from an alien race bent on destroying humanity.”

Author: “After retiring in 2009, Arthur M. Doweyko took up writing fiction. His novel Algorithm garnered a 2010 Royal Palm Literary Award, and is also available in paperback. He has published a number of short stories, many of which have been selected as Finalists in the Royal Palm Literary Award contest, and two Honorable Mentions in the L. Ron Hubbard Writers of the Future Contest.

Arthur was awarded the 2008 Thomas Alva Edison Patent Award for his contribution to the discovery of Sprycel, a novel anti-cancer drug successfully brought to the marketplace in 2009. He has authored over one hundred publications (papers, abstracts, patents, book chapters) and has been an invited lecturer in a number of drug-discovery and computational venues.

Arthur lives in Florida with the love of his life, Lidia. When he’s not writing, he’s happily wandering the beaches.”

More about the author here, on his website: http://www.arthurmdoweyko.com/

Appraisal: This is a mashup of book genres which, like most hybrids, fizzes with energy. It is set mainly in New York in 1975. As well as apparent guardian angels and an imminent End Of The World As We Know It scenario, there is a new theory of Creation; murder, burglary and general mayhem; and a cast of interesting characters it is easy to root for: there is plenty going on.

Doweyko has an economical, straightforward style which pushes the book along at a goodly clip. Plenty of humour – black, slapstick and ironical  – is employed as a well-judged leaven to the running, fighting, and gory bits, of which there are plenty. In addition the author delivers pithy and interesting description of how ‘Apple’ lost his leg in ‘Nam, the second-hand bookshop where he works and the various locations in New York, London and Tibet (yes, Tibet) which all help to drive the book along.

Tibet. Yes. The characters really get around, so the reader needs to pay attention. I like this sort of surprise, the location shifts are well signposted and the changes quickly bed in. None of the scene changes are gratuitous. Tibet is essential if for no other reason than we meet two delightful characters there, whom I enjoyed very much. The epilogue to the book, when these two are returned to the bosoms of their families, is quite delightful.

The book reminded me slightly of Dr Who, in that someone frequently yells ‘run!’ at his or her companions. That sort of frenetic solution to plotting needs to be very well focussed, and used sparingly, to be effective. In a similar vein, people who quite patently should be dead of their injuries, who are described as dead, and are mourned or celebrated as being dead, keep coming back to life and then being killed all over again. This sort of ploy also needs to be used more sparingly than it is here. There are some characters who are significantly more powerful than others – to the point where at times this reader questioned the need for the ordinarily-abled to be on the team. And, finally, the reader is clouted with the (thinnish) reason why the world needs to end rather too frequently. The sum total of which infelicities have lost the book a star.

Nevertheless, the quality of the writing is good enough to transcend that sort of thing, and I think you will find this book an engaging read if you like your crime a bit off the wall and/or your SF rooted in the here and now. And if you have a thing about Tibet it should leave you with a big, goofy grin on your face. It did me.

Here’s a link to buying the book in the UK:

https://www.amazon.co.uk/As-Wings-Unfurl-Arthur-Doweyko-ebook/dp/B01HY589FG/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1474457443&sr=1-1&keywords=as+wings+unfurl

and to purchasing in the USA:

https://www.amazon.com/As-Wings-Unfurl-Arthur-Doweyko-ebook/dp/B01HY589FG/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1474457985&sr=1-1&keywords=as+wings+by+doweyko

My rating: ****

Approximate page count: 234 pages

Poems : Corbyn

September 21, 2016

Two opportunities upcoming in October to enjoy fresh-minted poetry and music and support Corbyn, courtesy of the excellent Shoestring Press. See reproduced posters below for dates, times, poets reading etc –

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For some reason this second one won’t display as a proper poster – but click the link: it does work. To save those of you already promised elsewhere for the afternoon of 22 October from a wasted click, I will confide that that is the date of the second launch, in Oxford, at 4.30 p.m..

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2312 by Kim Stanley Robinson

September 14, 2016

2312 by [Robinson, Kim Stanley]

I really enjoyed this – but I should add that I am a fan of his Mars trilogy, and of his ecological novels too (he manages to make cycling sound like fun – which is an achievement, in my book). I was made up to find he’d written another book in the ‘Mars’ milieu (this one – and since then another ‘the Martians’ which catches us up with how terraforming Mars and living in harmony with each other is going). If you relish learning about the ways people live after we’ve made the move into space, then you will love this book. If you want to know about the planet Mercury, then you will love it. If you want a lot to happen, not a whole lot does. There is a long walk and a lot of whistling. There are maleficent pebbles. There is galactic politics. Robinson does, however, continually review what it is to be human and what the human condition could become. Like all his work, it is immensely thought-provoking, even if you don’t believe that this is the way humanity will develop. 2312 has confirmed my opinion that Kim Stanley Robinson is the finest writer of SF working today.

Review of Tesla’s Signal by L Woodswalker

August 14, 2016

**Originally written for “BigAl’s Books and Pals” book blog. May have received a free review copy.**

Tesla's Signal by [Woodswalker, L.]

Genre: science fiction

This is from the author’s ‘Note to Readers’ at the front of the book:

“The Serbian-American scientist Nikola Tesla (1856-1943) is the developer of the alternating current electrical system which the world has used for over 100 years. Thus, he can rightly be called ‘the father of the industrial age’. And yet until recently, his name was virtually invisible. When I first learned his story, it seemed so incredible that I said ‘this is a science fiction story that practically writes itself!’ … Some of the devices and theories depicted here are loosely based on Tesla’s documented work, while others are based on the more ‘legendary’ aspects of the Tesla story. Still others are sheer fancy. … The basic ideas of this novel – that Tesla had otherworldly visions, and claimed to have received signals from Mars – are documented in all of his biographical material.”

Description: I have filleted the description of the book on Amazon a bit, as it is full of spoilers.

Electric Wizard…Mad Scientist…Public Enemy Number One!

Nikola Tesla has a unique affinity for electric current…he can visualize the unseen…he speaks with beings of light. In 1899, he receives a message from “Mars”. …Then things start to go wrong – and he and his brilliant colleague Clara must go on the run. … At the same time, Nikola must learn to tap into the cosmic forces and face his own demons. …A classic-style SF novel that blends real history with fantastic gizmos, far-out space wonder, and hair-raising adventure.

Author:“L Woodswalker (Laura Todd) was raised in State College, Pennsylvania, where her father was an engineering professor at Penn State University. Her family enjoyed hiking on Tussey Mountain and the surrounding hills of Central Pennsylvania. She is a lifelong hiker and woodswalker.

At college her favorite subjects were Art and Biology. She later worked as a nurse and graphic designer. She became interested in electricity after learning to wire simple LED circuits.

Woodswalker has attended the Philadelphia Science Fiction Writers’ Workshop for many years. Her short fiction has been published in Marion Zimmer Bradley’s Fantasy Magazine and The Magic Within anthology.

When she is not writing, Laura might be composing ambient electronic music, which she performs at the Electro-Music Festival in Huguenot, New York. Some of her other creative outlets include art and video, DIY crafts and steampunk gadgetry.

Laura’s grandmother Ida Epstein came to America from Kostopol, Ukraine, in the early 1900s. To Laura’s knowledge, no one from this side of the family was a theremin player or an electrical genius. As for Jake Flint, it is possible that he, or another ancestor, may have been a bootlegger.

The author admits that there might be a sequel to Tesla’s Signal in the works. To keep apprised of the author’s latest writing projects, visit woodswalker.weeby.com or facebook.com/teslasignal”

Appraisal: You get a lot of bang for your buck with this book. I picked it up because I knew so little about Nikola Tesla. I only heard about him properly when British telly had a brief flirtation with the excellent ‘Warehouse 13’ SF series. And it is certainly true that I know a lot more about him now. How much of what I’ve learned is true is another matter.

So the bangs you get for your buck are these: lots of information about Tesla’s life and inventions (although you have to decide for yourself what of this is fact and what is fiction); two sorts of aliens – the Alu (all of whose names begin with an ‘A’ – which made them pretty interchangeable for this reader) and the U’jaan; a well-drawn, kick-ass, super-bright, female colleague and love interest in Clara Eps; Theremin  concerts (if you’ve ever wondered whether, after Sheldon Cooper’s assault upon it, the device is capable of making actual music); all wrapped up in a well-written, old-fashioned, rip-roaring SF romp along the lines of HG Wells, Arthur Conan Doyle or Robert Louis Stevenson. And you get Woodswalkers enormous enthusiasm for her subject on every page.

That’s a lot to fit into one book. It is, therefore, unsurprising that the book has sprawled a bit. There are places where the story loses focus briefly, and some unnecessary repetitious material appears. Furthermore, I did wonder about the vast numbers of electrical things that Tesla and Eps made in very small amounts of time – the most sensational being a flying saucer invented and constructed in days.

On the other hand there are many lovely passages like this:

“… he had seen the whole system in his mind: magnets and coils of bright copper wire, the color of earth’s blood, drawing out the electrons into a miraculous dance. And then further refinements to control and guide the current, braiding them as Mother’s fingers twisted the yarn on her knitting needles.”

If you want to know more about Nikola Tesla, and/or enjoy SF novels from the turn of the twentieth century, then I think you will enjoy this book.

Format/typo issues: On the file I read there were some, minor, proofing errors and a recurring formatting infelicity.

Star rating = 4

Length: 408 pages

 

The Versatile Blogger Award

June 22, 2016

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Thank you for nominating me, ajoobacats (https://ajoobacatsblog.com/author/ajoobacats/), on your Daily Musing and Reflections blog, for this intriguing award.

Rules:

Show the award on your blog
Thank the person that has nominated you
Share 7 different facts about yourself
Nominate 15 blogs of your choice
Link your nominees and let them know of your nomination

7 facts about me:

I self-publish

I live beside the seaside

I am writing a ‘history and mystery’ novel about Genghis Khan’s missing body

Last Monday I wrote a sonnet (it wasn’t awfully good, but it was definitely a sonnet)

My Swiss Cheese plant is taller than I am

I still love cork tiles (yes, you can still get them)

I believe I am turning into an unreconstructable old anarchist.

I nominate:

Caroline’s  @ Advancing Poetry – http://advancingpoetry.blogspot.co.uk/ (poet’s blog)

Dan’s @ https://danholloway.wordpress.com/ (writer and thinker’s blog)

Sam’s @ https://childtasticbooks.wordpress.com/ (blog about children’s books)

Fay’s @ http://www.fayroberts.co.uk/ (performance poet’s blog)

Big Al and Pals @ http://booksandpals.blogspot.co.uk/ (reviews of self and small press published books)

and the related blog for indie writers: http://www.indiesunlimited.com/ (resource for indie writers)

Hannah @ http://hannahchutzpah.com/ (performance poet’s blog)

Marshal @ http://www.marshal.co.uk/comedy/ (stand-up comedian’s blog)

Ruth @ https://ruthdownie.com/books/ (historical novellist’s blog (Roman period))

Alison @ http://alison-morton.com/ (alternative history author’s blog (Roman period +))

Joanna @ http://mydelayedreactions.blogspot.co.uk/ (author’s blog)

Carol @ http://carolmckay.co.uk/ (author’s blog)

Bill @ https://billgreenwell.wordpress.com/ (poet’s blog)

Katrina @ http://www.katrinanaomi.co.uk/ (poet’s blog)

Crysse @ http://www.cryssemorrison.co.uk/ (author’s blog)

(Don’t feel obliged – as if you would! – to continue this chain. It has been a pleasure to give you all a shout-out).

After the colon …

May 29, 2016

I make a point of having a rummage through the Kindle bestseller lists about once a week. These days I have noticed there is a fashion for adding something … ‘eye-catching’ I suppose is what it’s meant to be … after the title, by bunging in a colon. Neither the colon nor what follows are, actually, part of the title.

Here are the top 10 ‘after the colon’ listings this week. They comprise 10 of the top 14 books listed:

the #1 bestseller’ (well, it is, so fair enough)

a psychological thriller with a twist you won’t see coming

the gripping debut thriller everyone is raving about

the gripping thriller that everyone is talking about’

a gripping serial killer thriller

a gripping serial killer thriller’ – (yes, honestly, repeated exactly, word for word. At this point I am going to out ‘Bookouture’, the publisher of these two books by different authors, and suggest that they should get some kind of award for paucity of imagination)

the perfect feel good summer read

the gripping psychological thriller that’s got everyone talking …

a laugh-out-loud read that will put a spring in …’ (the title is so long it has dribbled off the end of the space available for it)

a shocking and compelling new crime thriller – NOT for the …’ (Again – too long, so truncated. Not for whom? My guess is that the people for whom it is not are the oh-so-clichéd ‘faint-hearted’. But we shall never know, because the number of spaces available for this tagline has been miscalculated. The book it bigs up is #30 paid for in the Kindle Store. I find this the most fascinating of the 10. Can it be the unfinished tagline that has pushed people to read it?)

The authors and/or their publishers have spotted that there is space for titles longer than they’re using and have decided to exploit this. Unfortunately, in several cases, they have bundled together so many words that important information (like which number book in which series this book is) disappears off into the ether. Which I consider silly. One of the things which irks me about Amazon’s listings is how hard it sometimes is to find the books in a series in the order in which one wants to read them. Obviously this ain’t helping.

But the thing which has impelled me to blog about it is this – is the hyperbole after the colon helping anyone establish anything? If you want a thriller, there is a category for that on Kindle. And when one goes to that genre, there are these same books again (not the romances, obviously).

If you really, really can’t let those unused spaces alone, can you and/or your publisher not find anything more original to say about your book than ‘gripping serial killer thriller’? (The two romances have done better, so the bar isn’t set absolutely at ground level.) And do you attribute your good sales to this standard, ubiquitous, hyperbole after the colon, or to the quality of the book?

Authors – do you do this? Do you believe it works?

Readers – does this inform your decision on what to read?

I would be interested to hear your thoughts, folks.

 

Review of ‘The Scroll of Years’ by Chris Willrich

May 28, 2016

     

I pursued this book high and low and finally fettled a copy with the depressing word ‘discard’ on the back. Thereafter I have taken ages to read it, in the same way that one tries to make a particularly delicious ice cream last.

This is the first full length novel about Willrich’s delightful pair of characters Persimmon Gaunt and Imago Bone. I first met them in short story form and was bowled over by them and their adventures. Hence my quest, when I discovered they existed at longer length. They make guest appearances in various SF and fantasy magazines over more than a decade, so I am hoping that Willrich collects all their adventures together at some point.

What is so great about these characters? Well, obviously, it is what Willrich has made of them. They inhabit a world (at times, worlds) which Willrich has teased out of our Far East, but with subtle differences and shifts which mean that just when you think you have a handle on the what, where, why, when, how and who of it, the whole thing gives a shake like a wet dog and you end up in a different ambience altogether. There are dragons (I love dragons) and then again, perhaps they aren’t dragons. There is magic, and belief systems that one wishes really existed, and true love and honour, and extraordinary feats of physical daring and strength, and immortality and death, and a scroll into which one may enter and live. It is the scroll that provides the heart of the book. Gaunt dives into the scroll when in extreme peril. But a scroll is, itself, a fragile artefact – will it survive?

Willrich’s plotting is delightful. But it is his turn of phrase which never flags. He constantly draws in allusions and permits himself excursions around his own plot which, nevertheless, do not slow pace nor obfuscate the plot. This is clever work. The result is thought-provoking as well as a rollicking good fantasy story. Here is a short extract, taken at complete random, to show what I mean. Any page would give as good an example:

“’Is this place a sort of dream?” Gaunt asked. “Or am I truly in another universe?”

He laughed. “Every place is a sort of dream. But more to your point, this place is normal.”

Now Gaunt laughed. “Having arrived via art appreciation, I question that view.”’

‘About the author’ assures the reader that Willrich is now writing full time. I should jolly well hope so. I am awaiting your next novel with breath bated, Mr Willrich …

 

The Course

May 26, 2016

a play by Brendan O’Carroll, directed by Jan Dench: performed 18th -21st May 2016 at The Warehouse Theatre, Weymouth

Brendan O’Carroll is a polarising sort of chap. ‘Mrs Brown’s Boys’ is a guilty pleasure of mine. I sometimes channel-hop into it, and always stay until the end because I am immediately roaring with laughter, no matter how daft it is. Laughter is never to be scoffed at. Even a cheap laugh – which is what many would argue O’Carroll’s humour is. It depends quite a lot on mugging to the audience and plenty of ‘feck’ and ‘shite’. But it turns that frown upside down. Laughter is good for whatever ails ye.

O’Carroll writes the scripts for ‘Mrs Brown’s Boys’ (as well as starring in it and populating the cast with his family). So one might argue that the TV show is enough to keep him busy. But he has also written several spin-off Mrs Brown novels, an autobiography – and a play: ‘The Course’. This was first produced in Ireland, where it apparently broke box office records, directing and starring in it himself, and subsequently toured Britain and the USA.

This play was performed by Weymouth Drama Club last week. They made a lovely job of it. I canvassed one or two of the audience and was told that WDC are always a strong company. I look forward to future productions at their little Warehouse Theatre. The jammy blighters have their own premises! They are serious about what they do (one must always be serious about comedy, in particular, of all the dramatic genres) and have the means (both in talent and premises) to do it well.

The script was very O’Carroll – easy to speak and easy to listen to, it was well-plotted and very funny, relying on plenty of ‘feck’ and ‘shite’ of course as dramatic punctuation. A classful of six losers is turned, in the space of two hours, into six vibrant human beings with futures. Sure, the characters begin as stereotypes and end up as different stereotypes, those who have been built up for a fall get one, and the journey the characters have been on is in no way extraordinary – but it is well told and no less true for treading well-worn paths. The gags come thick and fast. I particularly enjoyed the description of the insurance the six were to be let loose on the world to sell – if you listened closely (and the highlights of the policy were repeated just enough times so you got it) the exclusion clauses of the policy ruled out the possibility of it ever being paid out. Rebuttals was another particularly funny thread running through the students’ revision sessions.

‘The Course’ teaches prospective insurance sellers about PMA: Positive Mental Attitude – something which O’Carroll himself espouses. The back of the programme was all ‘about the author’ and there he gives two instances of people for whom PMA was crucial – Christie Brown, the ‘my left foot’ artist, and Nelson Mandela. O’Carroll claims he himself is a classic example of its power.

This play has been around for 20 years, and I’ve never come across it before, which I find extraordinary in itself. If anyone reading this is casting about for a funny, smallish cast (6 men: 2 women) play for the amateur stage – if you can handle the accents (which are essential) – this will make for a very amusing evening.

Oh – I nearly forgot: the incidental music! The music was composed and played (not live, sadly) by Simon Swarbrick, nephew of Dave and local-ish resident. It was brilliant! Irish diddly-aye music plus electronic elements. Swarbrick recorded fiddle, guitar, keyboard, something smallish and mandolin-like and maybe other instruments blended into the mix too. The result was a whole band playing. He is a very talented multi-instrumentalist and full-time musician and composer. The links were a delightful shop window of his talents. The result was completely appropriate (one motif was a braying donkey) and made me wish that the time between scenes could be longer (which is a first). I shall have to keep an eye out for gigs he’s involved in.

Jonathan’s Shield by Channing Turner

May 17, 2016

**Originally written for “BigAl’s Books and Pals” book blog. May have received a free review copy.**

Genre: Historical fiction
Description:

“Beral’s only goal is to serve loyally as Jonathan’s shield bearer and protect his prince through whatever battles may come. But Jonathan needs a friend as well, a man he can trust while navigating the precarious footing of his father’s court. Being that friend puts Beral’s life in danger and stretches his loyalty to the breaking point. For what Jonathan wants is to do Yahweh’s will, whether that be through defying his increasingly paranoid father, King Saul, or supporting the aspirations of young David, whom Jonathan believes is the rightful heir to the throne.

As he competes with David for the hand of the king’s daughter, Beral struggles to hold true to his loyalties, even while he watches King Saul descend into madness. If Yahweh withdraws his protective hand, Beral and his men will be all that stand before their gathering enemies. Only one thing is certain: Beral’s fate, as well as the future of Israel, is tied to the virtue of their king, and Saul’s honor has long since fled.”

Author:

His publishers (Red Adept Publishing) say of him: “A son of the South, Channing Turner grew up in Arkansas and Louisiana before graduating from Louisiana State University in Psychology. He did graduate work in marine biology and became an estuarine biologist along the Texas coast. After retiring from the petrochemical industry where he worked in Louisiana and Montana as a laboratory analyst, he managed the 2010 US Census in Montana and northern Wyoming. He now lives in eastern Washington with his wife, Barb.

Channing served in the army and was discharged as an Armor captain. Reading and writing are his sedentary pursuits, but he also enjoys riding his Tennessee Walker in the Blue Mountains of Washington and Oregon.”

This, I believe, is his first published novel. To learn more about Mr. Turner feel free to visit his website or follow him on Facebook.
Appraisal:
I enjoyed Jonathan’s Shield very much. Turner has gone to the Bible, and imagined what the arc of the extraordinary events described in the Book of Samuel might actually have been. The Bible is fruitful ground for writers. I’ve worked up a fictional ‘what if’ from the New Testament myself. It offers lots of opportunities for one to fill in all the frustrating gaps in the story which have occurred in its transmission through time and various languages down to us today. But it is, of course, a fiction. It is not a Christian book. It may, indeed, be a book some Christians will find strays too far into fictional territory. There is plenty of smiting, a lot of treachery, and hubris gets its comeuppance, but there is also a fair amount of sex.
The book deals with what happened when the Israelites, under King Saul, got fed up with being pushed around by the Philistines in particular and most of their neighbours in general and fought back. Historical figures about whom we know rather less than, perhaps, we think we do – Saul, Jonathan and David – get plenty of time on stage and Samuel the prophet has himself an important role to play; the events of the book are observed, experienced and related by Beral, the shield bearer of the title.
Turner uses a verse from Samuel as an epigraph before each chapter, and what follows expands on that, rolling the sparse source material together and forward to build an exciting story. The author has a good, plain style without frills or furbelows which suits his subject matter well and keeps the story moving at a goodly clip. He knows how to pace a story, what to put in, what to leave out. This is a lean, mean, fighting machine: lots of battles occur and are excitingly related. Even the drilling of soldiers to become an everyman army, with the tricks of how to catch the men’s imagination and commitment, and revelations about Beral the narrator in the mix, is riveting.
Turner fleshes out female characters as well as male ones (not something the Bible does much of) and the book is the richer for this, as women are often motivation for upheavals in empire as well as beside the domestic hearth. Seeing both genders in their familial and societal roles lends verisimilitude and depth to the work as a whole.
Despite the small quibbles below, this is a work that is well worth your time if you enjoy biblical era epics, adventures set in the Holy Land, or sword and sandal fiction in general. And if you haven’t tried any, this book is a fine place to start.
Buy now from:     Kindle US     Kindle UK     Paperback
FYI:
In a few places, tiny infelicities of expression left me puzzled as to who someone was, or why the plot had just taken the turn it had. If you go with the flow it soon comes clear. Two such instances: who is Miriam? (she is a slave of Saul’s who Beral acquires as a maid later on when one has quite forgotten her earlier, momentary, walk-through part). And a second: why does David bring his brothers food? They are in the army, he is not – yet he is part of Saul’s entourage and it is odd if he doesn’t know that all food is shared via a commissariat system. It is, of course, an authorial device for getting him to the army camp, which just needs a teensy tweak to work perfectly.
Format/Typo Issues:
None. Looks very good on the page.
Rating: ***** Five stars
 
Reviewed by: Judi Moore
Approximate word count: 85-90,000 words